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Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was well written and powerful. The type of piece that stays a while after reading.

Julia Minutillo's avatar

I know

Monica A Leyva's avatar

The image of the flooded road stayed with me. We often call events “accidents” even when the warning signs have been visible for years.

What resonated most here is the tension between natural forces and human choices. The tide may rise on its own, but how we prepare for it, respond to it, and protect each other from it remains our responsibility. A thoughtful reflection that lingers beyond the final line.

Ambika trehan aka Ambs's avatar

Very well written